Tuesday, May 25, 2010

Imitation Poem

walking through the density
of trees,

the emptiness I find here
is full,

I will stay among them
for trust

the nature
the hope

1 comment:

  1. I like this poem. Even before reading the last line, you can know that its intention is to hold on to hope. Like Smith's poem it has this abstractness yet strong and concrete feeling to it. Your description is also very strong making it easy to imagine being in the place.

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